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Friday, September 17, 2021

The magic fairy

 

One day 2 kids went on camp a boy and a little girl. "bother I am scared" said the girl "you will be fine" answered the boy "ok bye mummy" said the girl "bye Lilly and Jack" the mum replied. hello i am your camp instructor "hi"  hello what is your name she said "Lilly" oh what a nice name "is there Monsters here" no. " hey sis there is Monsters everywhere" Jack said "no I want to go home" no there is not monsters  and we can protect you if there is "ok" so now you will be doing some camp activities she said. TO BE CONTEND

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  1. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2021 at 2:32 PM

    Hi charlie I like how you told your readers about how scared they were I like story's like that but I think you can write more than that other wise great story

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