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Monday, October 19, 2020

Giraffe Hotel

this is a real motel you can stay in the giraffes can visit anytime they like.
I see a giraffe  in paddock sticking his head in the Window.
I hear the noises the giraffe are making.
I feel the giraffes tongue on my skin.
I smell the  giraffes dirty skin.
I taste the yummy food at the restaurant and cafe.


after being with the giraffe would feel happy because its my  dream came true.





 
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 3, 2020 at 1:39 PM

    Hi Charlie,
    This looks like a really cool hotel. Maybe next time make sure that your writing makes a bit more sense and you spell everything right. Other wise it is a great piece of writing.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 9, 2020 at 11:42 AM

    Hi Charlie, how are you?
    This is a great piece of writing!
    Maybe you next time you could add a bit more words, and then it would be even more amazing!
    Remember to use capital letters at the start of sentences!
    Your friend,
    -Charlotte

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  3. AnonymousNovember 23, 2020 at 2:35 PM

    thanks Charlotte and Sophie have a great day.

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